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protest cuts in education.As we all know,education is the most important event
in the world.A country that value their citizens' education can develop well and
have a high influence in the world.We must educate our descendant better so that
our civilization can inherit generation by generation.Someone who cut in education may not realize its importance.
I also protest tax increases.Because there are too many people who become poorer and poorer in the world.Someone who cannot even eat full and wear warm.We cannot ask for more tax from them.However,there are too many people get richer and richer as well.Some little tax increase that does not have any influence on the rich may deal the poor even to dead.So the government should have tax increase on the rich and tax decrease on the poor.
Ping Sibo
I agree that education is important.
ReplyDeleteEducation can change not only the life of an individual, but also the future of the whole country.
Perhaps you should pay more attention to the tense and s-v agreement next time.
Thank you!!
DeleteI think the topic sentence of your second paragraph, which is "I also protest tax increases", is not so accurate. Maybe you should specify it and change it into "I also protest tax increase on the poor", because you say, "the government should have tax increase on the rich".
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