Heaven
Paeceful, merciful.
Resting, singing, praising.
Joy, excitement, temptation, addiction.
Suffering, torturing, cursing.
Dreaddful, fallen.
Hell.
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Once I was in the heaven,
where was peaceful and merciful.
I was here,
resting, singing, and praising.
It is full of joy, excitement, temptation,
and of course, addiction.
I became suffering, torturing,
and cursing.
I felt dreadful and fallen.
Now,
I am in the hell.
i love this poem
ReplyDeleteit seems only one step from heaven to hell! you do have a keen observation.
reminds me to be cautious of comfort and temptations, to keep alert on addictions.
Why don't make it from hell to heaven? This poem lookw like a litte bit darkness.
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting poem.
ReplyDeleteThere is a big contrast between your joy in heaven and your sadness in hell. So we should do merciful deeds in our daily life to make sure that we can go to heaven after death.:)