Maybe I will protest about the loss of the religious freedom. For we will be fully controled by others if we loss the freedom. However,Considered the fact that most chinese do not have their belives ,that people are forced to have a same belief may be a better result than nothing.As a philosopher said,"people who do not belive in anything will never gain a happy life." In that case ,at least ,some people will not just believe nothing but money.
If nuclear power is planted in my town, I will also stand out and protest about it.Beacause I cannot see the reason why this kind of dangerous things are planted in a peaceful and prosperous town but not somewhere else with less people. Here is the place where i have my past and future ,faith and dream.Losing it is what I cannot afford. I will do everything I can to save her.
Zhang Chenwei
Both are good paragraphs, and the second paragraph is strongly emotional. I hate to say that, but, I think the full stop in the very first sentence may should be changed into a comma and I think it is better to delete "maybe", because you have already protested about it.:)
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment and advice. I will take it into consideration. :)
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