The first thing i will protest about is going to war,which is also the most frightening thing to all people.Well, let's imagine how the world will be without peace.People will lose their passion to do anything living a life without any guarantee.Crying and dying happen anytime anywhere.In a word, everywhere and everything are ruined.NO peace, no human beings!
And the second thing i will strongly protest about is nuclear power plant in my town.As everyone knows,nuclear power a new powerful but dangerous power.People in the town where the nuclear power plant will under radiation,which do great harm to their health and their generation.Then the town will lose all the living things.So i protest it strongly!
I am impressed by your heavy yearning of having peace and the strongly will about protecting residents from nuclear power's radiation. But I think you still get space to improve: the "also" in the first sentence should be moved behind "is"; "how the world will be(instead of go on)"; misspelling of "powerful". And I looking forward to your new blog!:)
ReplyDeleteThank you very much! you are a really good commenter, and i will correct all detailed mistakes you mentioned! Thank you very much!
DeleteNo peace,no human beings! I love this sentence.But the 3rd sentence in paragraph1 may need to be improved.And the 'plant' in the 3rd sentence in paragraph2 may need to change a form.:)
ReplyDeleteyeah,i see. Thank you for your honest comments,heihei, i feel very happy about what you said,and i will pay attention to these mistakes! Thank you!
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