Monday, 16 January 2012

Blog 1) "Ms Pamela"-"Liu Yanan"-Two things I would protest about-Theme:School and Education

Protests
1.    Going to war            
If there were a war, there would be more and more injured in both two countries and many children would be homeless. Going to war increases the country’s budget deficit. There would be economic downturn covered whole country. Nothing can be worse than a war.
                                       I would try my best to persuade more and   more    people to participate antiwar demonstrations.                                                            We can carry banners saying “NO WAR” in front of Government Buildings.
2. Nuclear power plant in my country
       Although we are in high-technology society and nuclear power is new and useful power, I do not believe nuclear power is the most necessary power we must use. Because of its radiation, the people living near nuclear power might be unhealthy. There were many nuclear accidents before.
         Nuclear power likes a snake in the grass. It must not be plant in my town. I would hold an activity to beg our citizens sign their names in a petition claiming against nuclear.

2 comments:

  1. It is very good that opinions are clear. But in the first part maybe you can put more means of avioding wars. And in the second part I think "nuclear power is new and useful power" can be said as "nuclear power is a kind of new and useful power";"Nuclear power likes a snake in the grass" should be said as "Nuclear power is like a snake in the grass".

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  2. It is good that you put pictures.
    But I think if you write some connecting sentences between two sentences, it will be better

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