The frist thing I would protest about is going to war.If a country goes to war,it will take a lot of resourse and wealth of this country,which shuold be used in other places to promote the development.What is more important,when the war begins,cuontless people will lose their homes,possessions,even their lives.All of these are horrible.
Then,I would protest about cuts in education.As we all know,education in one of the most important things to a country.Only the residents of the country receive enough education can this country develop.If the government cuts the finds in edcuation,it will affect many people that they cannot get education well,which is very bad for the development of the country.
Your points are very clear and easy to understand,but the essay can be more excellent if you have checked your spelling.
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