1. Protest about going to war
I strongly protest about going to war, for war costs a lot of money and a lot of lives. No matter what kind of war
it is, it often left behind it a great loss of life and uncountable deeply and
incurably wounds inside everyone’s heart. The war of Iraq officially over on 16 Dec
2011. During this 9-year-long war, nearly 45 hundred American dead, more than
32 thousand wounded. On the Iraq
side, the estimate of dead begins at 150 thousand. And the cost in dollars surrounds 800 billion. No parades, no celebrations,
but the deeply pain and distress of losing families and friends overwhelm the
whole country. In a war, there will never have a winner. So what I protest most
about is going to war. And I really wish the world peace and harmonious
forever.
2. Protest about cuts in
education
Cuts in education means giving more burdens on students and their
families. And it makes having a further education even harder for those poor
students, which is quietly unfair and frustrated. Moreover, cuts in education
forces more students apply for educational loan. Once they graduated from school or college, they will
have to face the struggle of paying off loans, less likely to take major
steps like getting married and buying house. Education is the best investment
you can make in your future and economy need more people to have a further
education. Apparently, cuts in education slow down the pace of developing in a
long run, so I protest about that.
Your paragraphs are really great, especially the first paragraph. The example given in the first paragraph is persuasive.
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ReplyDeleteYou have a fantastic vocabulary ! The form of your sentence is also various and rich.But the 'over' in the 4th line may not be used correctly. And if the word "American" in the 5th line changes into plural form could be better.:)
ReplyDeleteI like your first paragraph, because you used a lot of datas, and they made your paragraph impress readers deeply.
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